Friday, May 4, 2012

SFFS Snippet Refugees On Urloon

Here is an excerpt from Refugees On Urloon, closer to the middle of the novella than previous entries.

Liam messaged back immediately.
I would like you to come visit in the domes. There is a section of domes made for land dwellers. You would be safe but would be able to get a better idea of what life is like down here. They have submersible vehicles so you can see all the domes. Pack a few things and meet the transport at the dock tomorrow afternoon at 13:00. I’ve already arranged to take a day or so off, so I can show you around. I want to show you the water city, and we need to talk. 

Svana replied. She would meet him at the dock.

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12 comments:

  1. Clandestine meeting...or just a ploy to see her. Been there and done that. ;)

    Nice snippet.

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  2. Always important to be wary of people who ask you to meet them via a private message... :-)

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  3. "...we need to talk." Uh-ohh...that's never a good thing. Nice little snippet!!

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  4. An invite by text? Not much of a personal touch. I suspect that this is not going to be good.

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  5. It's probably just a coffee date. It will all work out :)

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  6. How well does she know Liam? And texting may be the only communication mode possible.

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  7. I'M NOT SURE SHE SHOULD GO! HE SEEMS A BIT CONTROLLING AND WITH ABSOLUTELY NO MANNERS!! tsk!
    nice snippet!!

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  8. Fun! This is sitting on my TBR list right now. I'm looking forward to it. :)

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  9. Oh, I love everything going on here. The meeting, the domes, the water city--please, show more about the water city. Lovely descriptions.

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  10. Hmm, be interesting to see where they go from here ;-)

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  11. He really wants to see her. :)
    (I have an unfair advantage as I've read it all).

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  12. I am very much looking forward to reading Refugees on Urloon. I have my copy and I can't wait to tuck in!

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