Here is an excerpt from Refugees On Urloon, closer to the middle of the novella than previous entries.
Liam messaged back immediately.
Liam messaged back immediately.
I would like you to come visit in the domes. There is a section of domes made
for land dwellers. You would be safe but would be able to get a better idea of
what life is like down here. They have submersible vehicles so you can see all
the domes. Pack a few things and meet the transport at the dock tomorrow
afternoon at 13:00. I’ve already arranged to take a day or so off, so I can
show you around. I want to show you the water city, and we need to talk.
Svana replied. She would meet him at the dock.
Clandestine meeting...or just a ploy to see her. Been there and done that. ;)
ReplyDeleteNice snippet.
Always important to be wary of people who ask you to meet them via a private message... :-)
ReplyDelete"...we need to talk." Uh-ohh...that's never a good thing. Nice little snippet!!
ReplyDeleteAn invite by text? Not much of a personal touch. I suspect that this is not going to be good.
ReplyDeleteIt's probably just a coffee date. It will all work out :)
ReplyDeleteHow well does she know Liam? And texting may be the only communication mode possible.
ReplyDeleteI'M NOT SURE SHE SHOULD GO! HE SEEMS A BIT CONTROLLING AND WITH ABSOLUTELY NO MANNERS!! tsk!
ReplyDeletenice snippet!!
Fun! This is sitting on my TBR list right now. I'm looking forward to it. :)
ReplyDeleteOh, I love everything going on here. The meeting, the domes, the water city--please, show more about the water city. Lovely descriptions.
ReplyDeleteHmm, be interesting to see where they go from here ;-)
ReplyDeleteHe really wants to see her. :)
ReplyDelete(I have an unfair advantage as I've read it all).
I am very much looking forward to reading Refugees on Urloon. I have my copy and I can't wait to tuck in!
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