Sunday, May 6, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday: Starlander's Myth

Hi! I haven't participated in SSS for a long time, but am happy to be back. Here is a six sentence section from my Steampunk Space Western Romance, Starlander's Myth.

Sophie held her daughter tight as the small flitter zipped through the thin air of the bubble. Her heart was still racing. She wanted to tear off her clothes, grab Flora and fly to safety. But there was no safety. And this wasn’t a real wilderness where she and Flora could hunt while in form and survive. This was a dead asteroid with air pumped in under a bubble for the miners. 

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6 comments:

  1. Jessica E. SubjectMay 6, 2012 at 6:31 AM

    So very intriguing! A great six! :)

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  2. D CarneyMay 6, 2012 at 9:03 AM

    Very intriguing!

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  3. Sue Ann BowlingMay 6, 2012 at 12:10 PM

    Shapechangers, but what kind? Wings or 4 feet? In either case, the restricted environment of a dome is bad news.

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  4. Jocelyn RishMay 6, 2012 at 1:25 PM

    Ooh, very intriguing excerpt!

    Wishing you a very productive #writemotivation month,
    Jocelyn

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  5. Veronica ScottMay 6, 2012 at 4:23 PM

    Sounds like she's in a difficult situation. Very intriguing six, loved the "voice"!

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  6. Pippa JayMay 9, 2012 at 12:53 AM

    Ooo, horrible when you have nowhere to run. Or fly. :-/

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