This is my first *Weekend Writing Warriors* entry! My snippet comes from a high fantasy romance, High Haven (none of the characters are all human!). Follow the link to other great snippets!
There was still a bit of dim light left by the setting sun. Two males
stepped out of the shadow of the woods.
They
were fauns of a type Bluette didn’t even know existed. Instead of curved horns and
rough goat legs they had branched antlers, like a deer, and long smooth brown legs,
their shoulders broad under leather tunics. Both had beautifully formed faces with
high cheek bones and square jaws, discernible even from the distance.
“Ho,
Mallow,” one called across the meadow, while the other greeted Mallow's fierce sow with strokes and ear scratches.
“Ash
and Linden! What brings you here?”
That's a very nice description of the new faun type.
ReplyDeleteI like non-human characters. :)
It is nice to encounter a new magical creature. You described them so clearly I could picture them easily. You have me intrigued. This was an interesting 8.
ReplyDeleteI like your description of these creatures. I agree, it's nice to read about different fantasy creatures.
ReplyDeleteLove the idea of a sexy faun. I'm in!
ReplyDeleteAnd welcome to the fun. :-)
ReplyDeleteWhat an intriguing idea for a novel. I like it.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the #8Sunday! I loved the description of these fauns - excellent excerpt! Can't wait to read more...
ReplyDeleteWonderful description and great imagination. I like the creatures :-) Good 8! Welcome to weekend writing warriors. :-)
ReplyDeleteGreat description there.
ReplyDeleteNice creatures. Are they fauns or something similar. Welcome to WeWriWa, Melisse.
ReplyDeleteThanks for all the comments. This story (one of a series) has been sitting on my hard drive but comes to mind now and then. I always wondered if it was too far out there. I love the world and the characters. Like Narnia for grown ups.
ReplyDelete"Like Narnia for grownups." Perfect! I don't think it's too far out there. :-)
ReplyDeleteI thought it was a great post. A creative idea. I don't think there is anything too far out there anymore. :)
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